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LIFE AS A CREATIVE WRITING TEACHER
By Jean Lee
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U.S. News and World Report named Rutgers-Newark
the most diverse national
university in the country for the seventh year in a row.
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having an undergraduate creative writing program at Rutgers-Newark afforded an
unusual opportunity to respond to student desires and needs as they presented
themselves in the classroom rather than giving in to teaching creative writing
as it has been traditionally done in university creative writing programs,”
Professor Davis says. We are standing in front of Robeson Campus Center on a 780
day in April.
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For just over six year, working with only a two-course undergraduate sequence,
Davis has helped students produce a body of work that would exceed the
expectations of most undergraduate programs with concentrations in creative
writing, or even MFA programs with dozens of courses and dozens of professors.
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that were done in whole in Davis’ undergraduate creative writing classes. One
was The Red Moon, by Kuwana Haulsey published by Villard, a literary imprint of
Random House.
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“Everyone who blesses us with his or her presence in
this life is a teacher in some form or another. Thank you George Davis for
helping me realize that and many other truths that I knew but had somehow
forgotten along the way.”
Kuwana Haulsey from the acknowledgements page
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“Teaching students who do not see themselves as high literary beings, who simply
want to tell stories has been refreshing.” One mystery novel written in Davis’
classes was published in book form in London after appearing in serialization
in the student’s native Jamaica. One children’s book was published by Raintree
Publishers. At the end of any term there are several books written in his
courses circulating in the publishing industry.
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“Any one of them might find a publisher at any time,
or the writer might come back later with another work or a revision of the
finished work.” Each term several students complete screenplays in his classes.
“Screenplays are much harder to sell but I am using the many contacts I come
across to help these students.
“E.B. White’s daughter had, and perhaps still has, a traveling children’s book
show, and a children’s book written by a student in my class was/is being read
by Clay Akin of ‘American Idol’ on college campuses (Harvard, and others, the
brochure I saw said) as an example of new children’s literature as opposed to
the classical children’s literature of E. B. White.
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“On our campus to be truly multicultural you
must respect how others want the stories of their lives to be told.”
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“Another student had two close buddies die in the World Trade Center attack. He
was having a really hard time coping. I convinced him not to write about the
tragedy of their
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“On our campus there are so many wonderful
storytelling traditions.”
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deaths but to write stories about how much fun they
used to have. A producer for “Sex and the City” learned about the stories and
came East to work with him. He was still in my class as be began turning the
stories into television scripts, under the direction of the producer and me.
Eventually he took off for Hollywood.”
We have begun walking toward the building where Davis’ office is located: “I
think that creative writing programs should be moving towards an understanding
of culture and the place of storytelling in culture. If you want to be
effective, you’re force to do this at Rutgers-Newark. For as long as US News
has been keeping statistics on it, Rutgers-Newark has been ranked as the most
culturally diverse university campus in the nation. Culture and cultural value
conflicts produce the themes in individual lives that are worth writing about
for our students.”
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Of the students cited in this interview, Davis says, there are two Italian
Americans, two African Americans, one British American, one Jamaican American,
one Haitian American, one African, one Hungarian America, one Indian, two
Hispanics. “I don’t think that the primary focus should be on the fashionable
art for art’s sake trend in creative writing. I think we need to get back to
basics and focus on the many functions of storytelling in all cultures and how
those functions can be performed in commercially viable forms in the media of
emerging world culture,” Davis says.
“Just as university architectural programs are designed to make our students
design better buildings for everyone, our medical programs to make students
better doctors for everyone, our law programs to create better lawyers for the
variety of functions that lawyers perform in our society, our creative writing
programs should be designed to make mass media entertainment and infotainment
better and truer for everyone.
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“One of the primary function of storytelling at
Rutgers-Newark, and in the 21st century, is to help us know people from other
cultures better, on a deep soul level.”
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“Too many university creative programs think of teaching students to write
literary fiction as their only reason for existence. Then they complain that
graduates of these programs cannot find jobs. There are more jobs in media for
storytellers now than there ever was,” Davis says. “and certainly there is more
need for good stories.
Now sitting in his office in Hill Hall at Rutgers-Newark, Davis seems able to
go on for hours about his love for teaching the art of storytelling. His claim
is that at Rutgers-Newark the air is full of stories begging to be told
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person wishes. He speaks of a young woman from Nigeria who came into his course
declaring obstinately that she was definitely not a writer. She left after
having written over 50 pages of good fiction in one term. He has saved her note
to him.
Hello, Professor Davis. This is my final paper . . .I really put my heart into
it, as much as it was willing to open itself up. Thanks you for a great
semester. The experience was therapeutic and very spiritual for me. Thank you
for letting me write.
Umi
The 50 pages were the first part of a novel about a rail-thin young woman, not
so happy in a country where the fleshy earth-mother standard of beauty
prevailed, who comes to America and found happiness because thin is in.
“For example, we often hear the question: what can a graduate do with an MFA in
creative writing. I think that is the wrong question. The right question is:
what can I do if I know how to tell a good story. The answer is: wonderful
things for which I can get good pay, and I can inform and uplift the human
spirit.
“I am not against writers seeing a piece of work as art for art’s sake, but I
think that the greatest beauty is in the human spirit expressing what is true
about itself. Art for art’s sake can easily slip into a lack of moral concern.”
Davis says. “Pleasure without moral concern slides easily into post modern
obsession with endless permutations of the small self.”
A comment from an older student reveals that Davis is not anti-literary.
Dear Professor Davis: This week I began to see more clearly how powerful you
are as a creative writing teacher, and I want to thank you for opening windows
that I nailed shut for years as a writer. I am beginning to understand even
more your genius as a teacher. You are the first writing teacher in my life who
has allowed me to work in my voice. You are the first writing teacher in my
life who without theatrics or self-gratification has encouraged me in a most
serene and natural way. Not since I worked on my poetry with William Shawn and
Harold Moss at The New Yorker have I experienced such encouragement as a
writer. My writing class and Rutgers University are very fortunate to have such
a gifted and caring
professor.
William Quigley
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By now well over 100 students have come out of one or two terms of his course
with, say, 50 to 80 pages of good solid fiction in their own voices. “The
happiest feeling is when they go on writing after they’ve graduated. From his
email he produces a note from a woman who graduated two years ago.
Hey Professor Davis! I am so excited! I just finished my second screen play
(completely typed) I'm reading it over now for any errors or to make any
changes! It is the best feeling in the world. . . Write me back and let me know
how is everything! Take Care!!
Tanesha Littlejohn
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“One of the most important things you can do is
respect the unique way that a young writer’s story gets told.”
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“I try to give them something that they can use –a well defined skill. Fiction
is a craft. Fiction is an art. The true nature of fiction has what can be
called a craft-art duality, a nature that is a complementarity. My 10-year long
Spiritual Intelligence Action Research Project (a study of the relationship
between tangible and intangible reality) led me into the study of how
principles from new physics apply to other areas of human learning. Creative
writing is best taught with its nature as a complementarity ever in mind.”
Complementary is a term Davis borrowed from his research to enhance his teaching
methods. “It is a term used to describe a relation between two opposite states
or principles that together are needed to completely describe the nature of a
thing.
“To be successful as a creative writer it seems that it is impossible to view
storytelling as a craft without also viewing it as an art. Learn the craft so
that you can express the art seems to be the axiom. Everything contains its
opposite. In a post-Newtonian world many processes will be viewed as
complementarities. Irony is the term often used in a Newtonian world view to
describe an exception which is actually the rule.”
Presently a jazz or acting studio most closely approximates the kind of
complementary process that Davis says he has incorporated into his teaching of
creative writing. “In jazz the best improvised music sounds crafted and the
best crafted music sounds improvised. As Duke Ellington said ‘you’ve got to
find a way to say it without saying it. "creative writing has a push/let
duality. Push hard enough to let the student write; tech well enough to have
the confidence to stay out of the way.”
“In physics complementary is the tenet that a complete knowledge of
phenomena—light, for example-- on the atomic level requires a description of
both wave and particle properties. The principle was pioneered in 1928 by the
Danish physicist Niels Bohr. It is impossible to observe both the wave and
particle aspects simultaneously. Together, however, they are both necessary for
the full description of the thing. Creative writing is like that with the
craft-art duality.
“After studying creative writing’s dual nature I came up with what I call the
Studio Method, as opposed to the older Workshop Method of teaching. In the
Workshop method a student reads his or her work in class and other students and
the instructor comment on it. If there are 15 students in the class each
student might get only one or two chances per term to have his or her work
looked at.
“In the Studio Method the student writer creates as freely and artistically as
possible at home in response to a series of loosely structured assignments. The
student’s work is emailed to the instructor before every class. The instructor
reads the work so that when the student comes to class there can be an informed
discussion of any problem of craft that the student encountered.
By teaching the craft-art duality of storytelling, in studio, Davis has been
able to have students in the same class working on literary fiction, genre
fiction, creative nonfiction, children’s literature, plays, screenplays and
“participatory literature” for new media.
“The other thing that makes this possible, something else that came out of my
Spiritual
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Intelligence Action Research is the study of the relationship between brain,
which is tangible, and mind, which is intangible, and eventually into brain
science.” A copy of Scientific American is on the floor beside the wheel of his
office chair. He points to it.
You learn after a while how to stop focusing on the words on paper and focus
more on the words still trapped in the young writer’s mind. No matter how
clumsy those words on paper might be at first the
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words out of the mind or brain with the kind of fullness and complexity to
capture the complex truth of the individual human spirit revealing itself on
yet another day.
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